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Legio_Patria_NostraLegio_Patria_Nostraabout 3 years ago

Writing is okay, but I don't like the character.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 3 years ago

Average writing, just another story about two selfish narcissists. Much to descriptive. Didn't leave anything for the imagination.

Female_83Female_83almost 3 years ago

This is better off in the Loving Wives section. The writing was just alright and both characters were unlikable.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

I fell in love with this guy. I wish I could be his mistress and make fun of his wife.

NicealloverNicealloveralmost 2 years ago

I thought it has potential but it needs some more pathos. It should deal with emotions more than lust.

KaeyoKaeyoabout 1 year ago

How is this “romance”? The only person this MC is in love with is themself.

sixfoot4sixfoot49 months ago

Fucking hot! Got me hard, wanked off as I read. Mmmm

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