All Comments on 'The Cheating - BBC Story Ch. 03'

I really love the concept of this story but I found it too long and repetitive so my initial excitement waned. Please keep on writing but don't repeat the description of the characters (22 year old etc.) let the readers imagination fill in the details.

Love it. Hope for a continuation soon.

So nice to get the South African female perspective..I know of someone who travels to the "Free State to find new recruits" for work in and around Durban...He was born in the u.k. of Nigerian parents went a little wild in a gang and nearly got caught.So he went to S.A out of curiosity found a niche market for his business talents.contact me for more..?