All Comments on 'The Cheating Game Ch. 01'

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Orion623Orion623almost 18 years ago
Very Clever

Good plot line. Good writing with natural dialogue. Looking forward to Part 2.

MetzovMetzovalmost 18 years ago
I think

I'll wait to see the rest of the story before voting. It's hard to say how I feel about the stupid bet the sisters made yet. Is Jane really going to try to bed one of the guys to win? From the lack of comments I think others are feeling the same way. I've always thought betting on a person you say you love like they're a horse or Greyhound at the track shows a huge lack of respect for them.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 18 years ago
If Jane is the Brains of the family

can the other two walk and chew gum at the same time?

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 7 years ago
Really, really? Come on, come on. ......

Not even a BJ jeez what a waste 'IMO' of my time. ....

BuzzCzarBuzzCzarover 2 years ago

An interesting scenario for a story.

silentsoundsilentsound8 months ago

Nasty premise and interesting.

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