by ynona
ur story got my juices going as i read it. i had a great picture, created by your writing ending in A great orgasm , thank u, sexy
Lovely story. As a recent contributor to Literotica myself, I can imagine how you would feel writing it and I am very happy for you - I wish I was half as good! I am now off to read the next chapter and expect to continue to the end. Love every word of it so far.
More descriptives, I enjoyed the shadowing of your descriptions, however I'd like more details, hair color, eye color, cheek bones, leg lengths, lip types, breat shapes, . . . obviously not a catalogue, but ease our focus into more clarity.
That said, the story has been a fun, very sexy read.
100% Rating!
I must say I thouroughly enjoyed this beginning. Keep up the great work.
This is a beautiful erotic story. This is what it is all about! Thank you!
Well written, with excellent attention to every erotic detail. Loved it!
These two are beautiful together. I'm very glad they will be having more adventures. I'm looking forward to reading about it.
wow loved to have been there to watch
u wer sooooooooooooo hot
My kind of stories 2 women making each other thanks
I loved it. The build up was right on and the action was amazing. There will be more? Riht?
Fuckin' awesome!! What more is there to say!!
but I can't believe you both began eating each other before even sharing a warm kiss. I loved the story and hope you keep writing.
Great start !! Can't wait for next chapter. Don''t forget to worship those sweet asses !!