All Comments on 'The Checkout Girl 01'

Great start !! Can't wait for next chapter. Don''t forget to worship those sweet asses !!

but I can't believe you both began eating each other before even sharing a warm kiss. I loved the story and hope you keep writing.

Fuckin' awesome!! What more is there to say!!

Loved it. Can't wait to read more.

Damn I got so turned on by this...Give me more!!!!

I loved it. The build up was right on and the action was amazing. There will be more? Riht?

nice start....lookin' forward to more....soon!

wow loved to have been there to watch

u wer sooooooooooooo hot

My kind of stories 2 women making each other thanks

Exceelent beginning!! Can't wait for CLIMAX--Finish it soon.

Exceelent beginning!! Can't wait for CLIMAX--Finish it soon.

These two are beautiful together. I'm very glad they will be having more adventures. I'm looking forward to reading about it.

Well written, with excellent attention to every erotic detail. Loved it!

This is a beautiful erotic story. This is what it is all about! Thank you!

I must say I thouroughly enjoyed this beginning. Keep up the great work.

More descriptives, I enjoyed the shadowing of your descriptions, however I'd like more details, hair color, eye color, cheek bones, leg lengths, lip types, breat shapes, . . . obviously not a catalogue, but ease our focus into more clarity.

That said, the story has been a fun, very sexy read.

100% Rating!

Lovely story. As a recent contributor to Literotica myself, I can imagine how you would feel writing it and I am very happy for you - I wish I was half as good! I am now off to read the next chapter and expect to continue to the end. Love every word of it so far.

ur story got my juices going as i read it. i had a great picture, created by your writing ending in A great orgasm , thank u, sexy