All Comments on 'The Chemical Pt. 02'

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C_frommnC_frommnover 9 years ago
O.K.

But now that he has Control shouldn't he have sister bring him Slaves from School and their Mother's. He could pay back a lot of the People who abused him before and after the Goverment incident.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Grammer Rammer

Jesus, man...you need to sit down and familiarize yourself with a grammar/punctuation book...You have a wonderfully filthy mind, but in sharing the story with others, you come across like a 2nd grade Lithuanian dumb fuck. Search for an editor and clean it up

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First time writing one of these. Enjoy writing stories which always turn out as novels. Long winded I guess. I am retired from transportation industry. My early works are filled with errors miss spelling and poor paragraph formation. I tend to concentrate on the story more tha...

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