All Comments on 'The Chickadee Connection'

Chopping wood, attracting birds

Lovely tale, atmospheric, dreamy, satisfying. Nicely told.

I'm slow...the husband, handicapped? Mountain air, summer heat, and fresh love! Splendor in the grass, seems like heaven...

Excellent writing, very thought provoking. Great imagery in your words.

That was a great short read. I was expecting longer, but it certainly didn't need to be. And despite the new setting it was classic electricblue. Only you could evoke a crowded café scene in the middle of the Canadian wilderness.

Also, I loved that "color of her orgasm" device you used. Might have to steal that.

A lovely story - charming, organic, erotic and powerful. Thank you.

This was mesmerizing. The essence of poetry, artistry, and wonderment rolled into a woodland setting in Canada. How much more remote could that get? I loved the chickadee elements and how that was woven throughout the story and into the title as a clue at the end that the author had written about her.

It was an excellent read.

Excellent storytelling. Excellent writing.

I don't typically read EC, but this was a great enticement to come back for more.

This is really beautiful writing! You capture the essence of desire and you really take us deeply into the erotic (as opposed to writing down what happens in porn). I love the oozing wetness, those shifts in the pit of the stomach, those deep tingles and swellings you describe so well