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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Absolutely loved it

So much passion from Kayla and so much hatred. Like the story from both points of view. Amazing what thoughts are going through someone's head and how they get totally out of hand. Would like another chapter or two with how the two get along. I hope that she carries out her threat and does not fall into a submissive trap that so many stories do. Everyone else will see how quickly she becomes a dominate force at the station as she buckles down. Maybe she gets some video evidence and blackmails the chief? Maybe something happens and the chief apologizes to her for his actions and that he misjudged her so badly. 5 stars.

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Long time reader, new author. Prefer longer stories with character background. Hoping to write stories in multiple categories.