All Comments on 'The Childless Couple'

The writing was a little too clinical, but a very good story

Good story. My only complaint is the low amount of money being offered. I'm hoping there was a typo and you meant to add an extra zero to that amount. Other than that it was very enjoyable and you get 5-stars from me.

Good premise but the ending was too rushed and too civilized. You could have taken advantage of Jane’s hint about future meetings and Thomas’ submissiveness. And there was always the possibility of offering to repeat the service if they wanted more children.

Written too cold.

I thought we were going to get a special sentence from Roger saying something like: "We've been fucking for 6 months now... and she still isn't pregnant. I just didn't have the heart to tell them I'd had a vascectomy a few years ago! I mean, it was an interesting situation with two obviously submissive people and it was making me feel in control and powerful. Plus, I'm now getting Jane to wear sexy lingerie and she is really getting into multiple orgasms, serving as my sweet, sexy, slutty, wanton women. Thomas is enjoying his servant role as well, so why not keep it going for as long as I can? LOL"

5* from me!

Good premise, the writing was a little too clinical, the ending was too rushed, it could have had more of the feelings of their individual "turmoil" or internal struggles. Is Thomas really a cuckold? There is mention of submissive, this could be expanded.

He needs to breed her again.

Hot Hot Hot Story! 10 stars for the writer! Very Hot situation. I am surprised that they aren't continuing to have sex until she becomes too big to have sex! Sounds like she really enjoyed the sex and hubby was so submissive that he enjoyed it as well. Please add a chapter#2 with a continued sexual affair. The wife likes his big cock. The hubby likes watching, Everybody is a winner! Buster2U

So instead of taking the money, he should of informed the two Submissive couple that instead of the money he would come over every month, to have fuck Sessions as payment. I sure hope he got some kind of no child support legal paperwork for the baby..

Deserves a part2 where the submissive couple allows a monthly session with Roger during all months of pregnancy. Then they call him every birthday of child as sweet uncle.