All Comments on 'The Chosen One Ch. 04'

That female werewolf candrea needs belted in the snout. Kevin is in charge, not her. slap her around some in the next chapter so she gets the damn point.

What a way to leave a cliff hanger....tunnels?? really?? you are driving me delightfully crazy! <3 Kevin's story and cant wait to see what happens next with the team and the 'dark one'.

YES U ARE ON TOP OF THIS STORY!!! LOVE IT. I NOTICED THE SUBMISSION REFERENCES AND MY GUESS IS THE ANSWER TO THE RIDDLES ARE WITHIN THOSE SUBMISSIONS. THAT WAS MY FIRST AND ONLY THOUGHT AS I THOUGHT ABOUT EACH OCCURENCE.

Although there certainly had personal interaction in this chapter I mean come on Adam almost took out a she-wolf in the middle of his living room. But I think this chapter was really more about the technical side of things. Whether it was Kevin explaining good and evil angels or the team training and making plans. This seemed to be more about setting up the next chapter. Chapters like this are just as important as the one as full of action because w/o this chapter there could be no action. Job well done.......if you want to chat about my comment you know were to find me.....

the story thus far. I have to go back and read all of them; this one is so strong and outright it makes me Want to read all the previous stories...Keep it coming :>)

I am loving watching you progress as an author. You have grown so much from your first submission. Each chapter you write is more concise, has better grammar and punctuation, better dialogue, just better everything. You have taken the suggestions given to you and used them appropriately. It is a joy to see such progression. And you will only get better as time goes on. hugs

I have been really busy lately, so slow in reading this chapter. Great suspense as usual. Especially enjoying the increased security on the president. Can't wait for the next chapter. I like the Blue and Gold teams. XP