All Comments on 'The Chubby Girl Lifespan Ch. 01'

I found your story interesting and compelling. I thought the ending was a little abrupt and you could use an editor but otherwise it was well done.

I loved the characters' sense of urgency and hunger to experience their sexuality, including the narrator who describes herself so vividly as she becomes the slut for her two friends. The setting and the story itself are fascinating for a North American observer - I certainly want to hear more from the Chubby Girl.

Liked the build-up of the story. For me, it was totally relatable, coming from the same environs. Looking forward to a well written next parts.

next part will be up soon, this series will be of at least 15 parts, keep reading and keep supporting guys.

Nice work! I enjoyed the gradual built-up and intense conclusion. I want to see what happens next with chubby girl. I'm a little surprised that she agreed to the groping and oral with only token protest. Thank you.

Excellent....this deserves a second n third part.... perhaps her friends come back into her life.. group sex etc .... wish someone could take it up!