by SteveWallace
This Ch. has keep me vary hard and needing to read the next Ch. it was vary good
Great story for a while, now just a story of a bunch of sluts. Gone is the feelings
I liked the way the plot initially developed but we've lost The Circle. It seems to have morphed into random people fucking because they're horny
This started off as a halfway decent story, but without much depth. Now it's drifting like a body in a shallow river, and with about as much life.