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All Comments on 'The Circle of Friendship Begins'

by Jaxon16

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pepepilotpepepilotover 5 years ago
Good Story

I liked the story, but I got thrown off a bit when the characters changed. I did pick back up on it. I felt that the ending fell a bit flat and was hurried. Good read :)

Jaxon16Jaxon16over 5 years agoAuthor
Thanks Pepe

I am completing of the circle, and I should submit it for publication soon.

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