All Comments on 'The Classified Ad Ch. 02'

looking forward for the next chapter

I’m sure he took her ass also . Hubby needs to call her out immediately with tons of questions and force her to confess than dump her ass even though he pushed this to happen. She might even have a black Indian baby to raise. How do you think the wife feels after cheating the first time ? Leaving and driving home with the feel of another mans Cum and cock in her body and the taste of his cum. I would like to believe there is regret and remorse even if it felt good at the time. The story needs all that to come out.

would be nice to hear her side of the days events

But at least he's got pictures. I wonder if a good attorney could get him and a divorce AND get Vinod (terrible name btw) sent to jail? Don't bother posting again. This was just awful.

thanks for writing and posting!

All you do is read the stories and then come up with dumb theories on how this couple will be divorced or how the husband should dump her. Hey dipshits, it’s up to the author to decide what’s going to happen ...oh wait, do you idiots actually think this is happening right now? I suppose you have already proven how ignorant you are, so being delusional is not a stretch.

It's hard to suspend one's disbelief when the 'seduction' is so sketchily presented and so easily accomplished without any seeming effort.

I agree with another commenter that hearing the wife's viewpoint would fill in a lot of 'hard to swallow' 'gaps'.

Nicely set up and a super sexy plot development. I love Rachel's complete capitulation. (That would be me with the right prospect).

I love it and hope there is a third part. Down the hotwife rabbit hole Rachel goes.

I do pretty much hate all the Indian authored stuff, its always cucky to the max, must of been the British colonial influence.

I can hardly believe I was looking forward to part#2 so much and had to wait 2 weeks for that. Rotating cameras? How lame. No look of rapture on her face as he slowly fed his massive cock into her for the first time? Nope one minute she is giving him a blow job and the next minute he is pumping into her from behind. You set part 1 up so well then you fell way short in part #2 with the good parts. This story is over and unsaveable.

This is very well unfolded. I have a slight quibble with the device used by the author whereby sections of the action are skipped (i.e. the video feed cycle), but it works well enough for a story of this length. My wife is currently having an affair with a man nearly twice her age and so i can attest to the power of the older man who targets women in the early thirties. It's a powerful combination. I hope you'll write more episodes.

I hope there are more details to come. It is very arousing. Great job.

A little off butting with the camera feed changing,

But I hope your next installment will have him sending a dvd of the full events

Then he calls her to come to his house for more fun ect ect,

As I said before its my fantasy for something like that to happen to my wife.

Thanks for sharing.

Please continue this story line. I can't wait to read what happens next!

Kisses,

Jo

Short. Solid tension.

I love stuff like garage and estate sales. Never have much time but do hit a couple a year. Particularly like looking when I’m traveling for work. I’ve met more than a few Vinod’s in the process, great fun xoxoxoxoxo Annette

Great work. Please continue. Thanks!

at least the cuck is sterile. The slut should be too. No need for degenerating the gen pool.

Crap will be not rated.

I would love a part 3, the story is soo good and I have been waiting since you released it for the next bit! Keep em coming, love your work.

awaiting chap 3

Great story...loved the game he plays with his mind.

This was a great story. Well written and I think the plot was original. It held interest throughout! Great job! I would give Vinod my wife’s info if it turned out like this!

Please continue. I just discovered this story, and I need to know about the trophy closet!

I absolutely loved it

Indian Men are such great qbulls for white wives

Whether you continue this story with those chatacters

or tell us more about Vinod ans His numerourms conquests

Or write more about Indian Bulls and white wives

I'll be more than happy

when are you going to do another chapter;its been awhile. nice so far.x

Finish it, needs at least two more chapter's 👍