All Comments on 'The Cocktail Table'

I really like bukkake stories and found your story a cut above most. I guess it's because most stories of this nature are written by guys who seem to have disdain for the ladies they jerk-off on. Bukkake stories and films are usually presented from only a male point of view which reflects a sense male dominance rather than adoration of the female who after is the object of their excitment. But your story was quite different and in its way confirmed what I've always thought, namely that most women

a) have a propensity for exhibitionism, ie. love to be center of attention

b) luxuriate in their power to sexually excite men

c) love watching guys masturbate and

d) would give their eye teeth to have a group of men shoot their cum all over them.

That is, if they, like you, could exercise control over the guys and if like the guys in your story who seemed to understood that they were in essence worshiping you, that ejaculating on you is as it were a sacrificial offering, a tribute to you, the source of their arousal.

In any case, feel free to write back if any of this interests or if you have any thoughts on Bukkake.

Best Wishes,

spurton

Lovely story, you’re one fine writer, SueNH. Read this and Fun w Dick and Jane tonight, two very different sets of characters. I loved your writing, didn’t find myself super hot with any. Your characters spring to life, but you’re the more-knowing mildly jaded one. Write on, in any genre!

So hot. You're a fine writer, Sue, great pacing, consistent perspective, attention to detail. And playful, which is also hot. Thanks

The control and command of this bukkake scene is excellent