All Comments on 'The Cocky Coxswain Pt. 01'

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bienclarbienclarabout 4 years ago
Fun start - do some proofreading

"Whales" are animals, not a country.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

Very enticing start, please give us more.

63lsmith63lsmithabout 4 years ago
NICE START

Very good start, but we differently need more.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago
Nice start

I like your style of writing but Whales? Really? It’s Wales.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 4 years ago

dam so want you to get on with the story . Great start thanks John

okie_dokie28okie_dokie28about 4 years ago
Keep going!

I absolutely love stories about short, dominant, Alpha Males. I'm considered tall by most standards at 6'3" but my partner is 5'4 and he totally rules my world. Looking forward to seeing where you take this story.

Spadger2Spadger2about 4 years ago
Mr. Littledick

Being not so blessed in the 'meat' department myself I am always fascinated by other blokes' attachments, and often feel a touch of envy and longing, especially when observing black guys in the showers.

So it was interesting that our hero's little dick grew larger as he grew older, even if he was shorter in stature than his team-mates.

What is it about us that we want a big dick, when the one we have functions quite adequately?

AnonymousAnonymousabout 3 years ago

Good start but I can’t get past ‘Whales’ or the University of Sussex being in ‘Whales’

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

Wales, not Whales

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