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Anonymousalmost 10 years agoNice
Great work! Some of the best writing I've seen on this site. Keep it going!
Anonymousalmost 9 years agoThe coffee is cold...
Yo, Super-Human boy is about to bring home cold coffee and set into play Amy making his death look like a stroke! Good content, well-connected structure.
kelprimealmost 8 years agoToo easily...
...sidetracked. Must get coffee. Fucks ex boss. Must get coffee. Sets up sex and partakes. Must get coffee. Calls old boss.
MUST GET COFFEEE AHHHHH
Anonymousover 6 years agoLoved the Cafe Scene
Didn't enjoy the face-slapping part, cuz I'm not into that, but the rest of it was pretty hot.
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