All Comments on 'The Collar of Anubis'

Who could ask for anything more? Certainly not I. I would give this story six stars if it were possible. I hope that in some sequel she can re-enter this dig and bring out photos and tracings enough to make her reputation (and perhaps have a reunion).

Extra points for creativity. Well written. and extremely hot

My thinking was this was another fucked by a animal god/minotaur. Instead it has the feel of some epic story's first chapter.

^Pervus

I can see him jumping in and out of her life

Good story! Epic God level fucking, and the guy was bashful! Perfect

I love stories about ancient Egypt and it's gods. This is a great little story!

I'm a sucker for Ancient Egypt, and I'm glad I stumbled across this one. I think it can stand alone, although I can certainly see how you can continue the story if you choose. Plenty of heat, and a nice mythos that could be creatively worked into the real mythology and history. Well done!

I thought it was a very interesting start. You've left yourself with several directions for the plot (and a bit of history you could write in as well). Look forward to reading more.

good story. I read and enjoyed your first story also. You are proving to be good author and I look forward to reading your next story.

It has the essence of a good story, but the sex scenes overshadow the interesting portions, the plot, the story line.

You left it too early!!! Now you have to write nore, now would be good. I'm not a patient kitty. =^_^=PK

want more... longer... more detailed of course... but want more none-the-less...

Please continue!