All Comments on 'The Collection Ch. 01'

Loved it. Excited to see where it's going. Just be careful with some of your punctuation for the next instalment!

My only complaint is that that chapter 2 isn't here yet. :D Ignore the sad vile matter above. I loved it.

Love it! Can’t wait to read the next part!

Wow this is hot.

Loved it as well! So hot!

Good start. Looking forward to the next part. Keep going.

Thanks

Why didn’t she ask why he was looking for Ethan?

Very good start to an excellent story line. Kind of like a romantic suspense novel.