All Comments on 'The College Encounter'

you lost me when the third paragraph had an identical sentence to the first paragraph.

I believe you can do better. Please prove me right.

I agree with the previous poster about this one. Perhaps it would seem better in the “Erotic Couplings” category. When I read a romance story, I’m looking for backstory, setting, character development, as well as some action.

I do hope you’ll keep writing and I do appreciate your efforts.

You picked the wrong category.... Romance, no. EC, maybe....

Thank you for the suggestions guys. I will surely implement them in my next story!