All Comments on 'The College Intern Ch. 03'

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AnonymousAnonymous9 months ago

Complications ensue in this third chapter, and the reader is left wondering what is going to happen to the relationship between Alan and Kari. Hopefully, the author won't leave fortunate readers waiting for too long to find out. This story keeps getting better and better. Five stars.

AnonymousAnonymous7 months ago

Question...... How did the girls get into his Condo complex? It was clearly stated that they had an apartment on campus. His place was further away. How did they know there was a hot tub and to show up in swim suits, and that he would be there? Either he fell asleep in the hot tub and is having a fantastic dream. Or the girls have some crazy stalker thing going on LOL.

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