The Comet - Eden and Carlie

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Eden rememberes her first meeting with Carlie.
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Updated 06/10/2023
Created 05/07/2021
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When Eden met Carlie

-A Story under The Comet-

I was barely eighteen when I met my Carlie. Sometimes I think we were destined to be together. I've written a lot about how there really isn't such a thing as monogamy in our world anymore, but sometimes two women meet and there's just this undeniable spark. For Carlie and me it was a fucking warehouse fire.

It was the night of the comet. We celebrate every year and this was my first time attending the huge get together at our local park. I knew about the kind of wicked things that went on during the festival, but until then I had been to young to partake Mom was finally letting me out to play.

During the day the park was crowded with sexy bodies dressed in their most obscene little outfits, wandering among booths selling sugared beef on a stick, cool drinks, and various festival swag. I got a butterfly painted on my cheek and spent like forty bucks at a kissing booth being sponsored by our local fire department. The chief was on duty, and you haven't lived til you've had a six foot four inch redheaded amazon goddess devour your mouth with her rediculously dominant tongue.

I had my hair died pink at the time, pulled back in twin braided pig tails that dangled down my back. I went topless with these sexy little glittery star stickers over my big nipples and in an effort to make myself appealing to any hottie that wanted to mount up and give me some dick I had on these tiny little short shorts with a drawstring in front. They hugged my ass like a second skin and coddled my heavy cock and balls to perfection. I went barefoot too, basically puting it right out there on front street that I was down to fuck. Sure I wanted to see the comet, but I was hoping to do it with some big beautiful girl-cock up my ass.

My mother and I went together. She looked like a blonde goddess with her short bob cut and form fitting jeans and sneakers. Not as blatant as I was, she wore a cute little crop top that left her belly bare. She did let me add some glitter to her pretty body and paint a little heart on her cheek. She looked good enough to eat, and since I'd been openly sucking her cock since the night of my eighteenth birthday some months prior, I knew for a fact what a yummy treat she was. Full disclosure. I rarely left the house without a steaming load of her love in my tummy or bottom.

As the evening came we looked for a clearing on the grass to share. There were girls among the crowd selling these glow in the dark necklaces, so once my mom and I had laid out our towel and taken up a cozy spot to watch the event, I left to find us some glowy beads for us to wear and remember our first comet together.

Plenty of girls were giving me the eye as I found what I was looking for and slid a pink glowy ring around my neck. It looked extra cute laid across my basically bare titties, and I was happy to pose for the girl I bought it from so she could snap a picture and write my number on the back. She was hot, but busy. She promised she'd be calling me soon. I can't tell you how excited I was to finally be old enough to fuck whoever I liked.

On my way back to my mom I was to busy looking up at the sky and the far away pink glow on the horizon. I wasn't watching where I was going and I stumbled over a body laid out on the grass. Thankfully she caught me and kept me from falling face first into the turf, turning with me as I fell and ending up with me on top of her, perfectly positioned between her thick hispanic thighs. The hot meat in our overstuffed bottoms was smooshed together tightly as our eyes locked.

"Well hello there." Carlie spoke to me with a impish little grin. In the dim light of the evening and with my glowy necklace dangling between us she looked like an angel. Big brown doe eyes stared back into mine, and the way her long black hair was pushed back over her tiny ears made her look so cute I couldn't stand it. That combined with her wet lips and very inviting mouth were like perfection given form.

"Goddess! I'm so sorry." I said. I didn't move though and she didn't seem to want me to. I had fallen in a perfect missionary position with her, and despite the fact that we hadn't even been introduced yet I felt her soft little naked feet caressing the back of my thighs as we rolled our hips and lewdly rubbed our cocks together. She had a cute little G-string on with barely any material covering her huge prick and as she sat up on her elbows and gave me a cute little smile she shifted her body just so to allow our pretty dicks to snuggle.

"I'm Carlotta." She said to me. "I prefer Carlie, but mom says I need to act more grown up. She says I play to much."

"I like Carlie." I said, blushing. I felt a moment of courage and sat up between her gorgeous legs, running my hands over them and down along her hips as I stayed in place and began to openly grind with her. I could feel the swollen bulb of her meat bumping and rolling against my own and both of us were seeping with pre cum. Within seconds it had soaked through my shorts and her bikini bottoms. Our cocks were slick and gooey and getting wetter the more we frotted together. "I like to play too." I added.

We'd barely just met and it felt like we had already wasted to many words. Carlie groaned as I bore down with my dick into her own and she reached out with her pretty lips for one of my tits. I'd forgotten about the star shaped stickers over my nipples until i saw her take one of them between her teeth and pull back, peeling it away. She let the sticker fall free and latched onto my nipple like a hungry baby searching for milk.

The soft silky sweetness of her tiny toes sliding up and down the skin of the backs of my legs was so nice. I remember feeling her bare feet on me and biting my lip to keep from whimpering as she bit my nipple and tugged on my tit. I love my big titties, but I knew at that moment that I had only been keeping them safe for their true owner. To this day nothing makes me hotter than having Carlie nurse at me. She can suckle my breasts without touching any other part of me and make me cum like a fucking fire hydrant.

"You're so fucking hot." I purred as she fed. I caressed her cheek and looked into those gorgeous eyes of hers as i watched her gobble on me. "My mom is waiting for me, but... Mmmmmm. Bite a little harder. Feels soooo good."

I glanced the way I had come in search of my mother and our spot, feeling a little guilty for having abandoned her. When I saw her after a moment I had to chuckle. She hadn't let my absence affect her evening at all by the look of the hard bodied little brunette between her thighs, openly and publicly sucking my mother's cock.

"Looks like she's got company." Carlie grinned. She turned my face back to hers and I felt my cheeks turning red hot as she glanced down between us and reached for her bottoms. She tugged them aside to let her naked dick roll out on display and I was frozen in awe of her long perfectly curved latin weapon, so beautiful with it's almond color and a think sleeve of slightly darker meat covering it to just an inch or so beneath her glistening bulb. "We'll just have to stick together."

Nothing had ever felt more right as I leaned back and peeled my shorts down over my hips. I rose up, sliding them off and letting my own naked dick out to play. This time when I laid down between those satin thighs our cocks were naked together and as our lips found each other we began to kiss for the first time. Fuck! She was like spiced honey on my tongue.

Fucking in the park is only legal on the night of the comet. All around us other couples, threesomes, and moresomes were beginning the evening love making as the distant bright light of our heavenly body began to cross the sky. As I drew my mouth back from Carlie a long string of spit connected our lips and we both glanced above us, taking in the beauty of the object that had changed out world.

"Will you eat my ass and fuck me?" Carlie begged, turning my face to hers once more with soft fingers at my cheek. I groaned at her words and nodded, once more smashing my mouth down onto her own and devouring her as we pumped and twisted our hips and let our cocks roll freely between us. Her heavy balls felt incredible as my own knocked up against them; four heavy grapefruit sized orbs filled with pints of sugary cum that would soon cover us from head to toe.

She got on all fours for me, and I swear my heat skipped a beat as I moved behind her. I reached under her and took hold of her glistening shaft, pumping it as I lowered my mouth between her big beautiful buns. Like a milkmaid tugging on a cow's teat I tugged and stroked her huge bronze meat as I drew the flat of my tongue across her puckered ring. I pushed inside her and my eyes rolled back in my head as I took in her satin textures and lost myself in eating her ass. Her flavor was intoxicating. I was addicted from the first little lick.

Like the hot little latina whore she as Carlie pushed back at me to get more of my tongue. As she did she forced me down as well, wriggling her body over mine and trapping me in a sixtynine. I felt her grab my cock with both hands and then the hot wet suckling of her lips around me. I was rock fucking hard for her and in an instant she had almost 8 inches of my big dick in her mouth and throat, working me over, swallowing more and more of me as she savored her meal.

Neither of us were virgins, but we didn't have a lot of experience. The way we moved together was more instinct than skill, and she seemed to read my body and mind as to how to move when I needed her to. When I left behind her juicy pucker and steered her big dick toward my lips she rose up, groaning as I gave her my throat.

I swallowed her whole and listened to her whine as she bore down, letting her heavy nuts lay across my face and cheeks. She rewarded me by stuffing my full length into her in return and began to work her throat muscles to properly worship my fat dick.

I pushed gently, rolling her onto her side so we could both work each other better. With full access to her gorgeous dick I began to slide my lips up and down in long strokes, as I reached around her and slid my fingers between her pillowy butt cheeks. Her soft little velvety entrance was ready for me as I slid three fingers into her and began to dig deep into her hole. Her muscles gripped me and I could hardly believe how sweet her opening was as it suckled and sputtered at my touch.

She slurped my dick so loudly, like she couldn't have cared less who heard or saw us. I didn't either, and as she got noisy on me with her sloppy spit bathing I rewarded her with one of my own. I even took her hot dick from my mouth and spit on it, running my fingers along the length and staring at the swollen size. Like a big slimy soda-pop bottle made of soft flesh, her dick was as perfect as the rest of her. I couldn't help but roll my face into it, painting my cheeks with her juices.

There were oos and ahhs as the comet began to pass, and Carlie rose up onto her knees and snuggled back at me as we both looked up into the heavens. She glanced back and looked at me, eyes so full of love and longing; the little spoon to my bigger one.

"Take me." She begged. "They say if you cum in someone under the comet, you'll be together forever. Fuck me and cum in me, please." She purred. "Cum in my butt, Eden."

I wanted it as much as she did. With my fat prick in my hand I guided her butt back at me and pushed until she had my knob in her opening. She arched her back as I slid inside, then pushed her beautiful bronze booty back into my belly and swallowed every inch. We were both on our knees together, my tits pressed into her perfect back as she looked over her shoulder at me with tenderness and desire. I began to fuck her deep as she opened her mouth and welcomed my tongue with the sweetest kiss of our young lives.

I began to give her my dick as we both looked up at the beauty of the pink goddess passing overhead. Carlie's asshole was pure bliss on my length as I gave her every inch and reached around to tug and stroke her own dick as we fucked.

She brought her hands up and slid them back behind my head to hold me to her. Buried inside her, it limited the length of my strokes, but having her back pressed into my tits and her cute little butt snuggled up just below my belly was a pleasure I would never grow tired of.

I felt her little ass tighten on me, and with my hand handling her dick I knew the moment she was about to cum, her long greased length jerking and twitching as I pumped her. She leaned back into me, and I lay back with her as well, still on our knees but laying in such a way that as her dick began to pump it's creamy load it flew in beautiful ropes up and over our bodies.

A heavy glob of her yummy milk slopped across my cheek and lips and I slurped it in to savor her sweetness. With my free hand I reached around her and ran my fingers across her belly and tits, groaning as I felt long jets of her cum flying across her naked body. I caressed her with it, painting her with her own spunk as I felt my own dick bulge in her butt and begin to let loose with it's own gusher of love.

We were both lost to it. Our bodies were shaking and trembling with pleasure as I held her to me and we looked up into the heavens to see the comet overhead. It was as if the goddess of cock had blessed us, and her big beautiful dick was dangling over us as we fucked.

My lover's hole was so tightly wrapped around me that hardly any of my cream escaped her. I could feel her tummy swelling just a tiny bit under my fingers as I finished in her and as we came back up together and turned to face each other she wasted no time in going down on me, wrapping her candy lips around my dirty dick and groaning with pleasure as she suckled and slurped me clean. As she did I just sat back, purring at her tenderness as i caressed her pretty hair and let her worship me.

She came back up to me and i pulled her into me, loving how her slick little cum slathered body felt pressed into my own. I kissed her once more so I could taste what she had, and as our tongues wrestled back and forth in our mouths we created a new language just for us in our moans and whimpers.

Both of our cocks had spent so much thick spunk. My balls should have been utterly drained by her tight little vice-like ass, but as we finally broke our kiss and looked down at our pretty pricks we couldn't help but grin at one another. Both so big and hard, neither of us was ready to stop just yet.

We wrestled a little, giggling playfully until Carlie shoved me onto my back and took her place between my legs. I welcomed her, spreading open and reaching down to lift my big balls aside as she pressed her dick into my hungry hole.

She slid into my ass with ease, throwing her head back in a moment of bliss as she bottomed out in my anal womb and began to bore down so her big dick could bend and bow inside of me. When she looked at me again, she gave me the dirtiest little smirk. Then she fucking raped me.

Like a little whorish porn star, my sexy Carlie slid one of my legs up over her shoulder and reached around it to take hold of my big dick, gripping my length like a handle as she started pumping my insides with her massive cudgel. With her other hand she took me by one of my ankles and held my legs wide open so she could get even deeper, holding nothing back as she fucked me like a stuck pig.

I groped my own big titties and dug my fingers into the flesh around my nipples as she wrecked me. I swear with each stroke she opened me up more and more, rearranging my insides to make a new home for her big latina cock. I mewled like a wounded animal as she used me, and when i would look up at her and see how she was looking at me I had never felt so loved.

he came again inside of me and this time it was my own cock that spurted hot sperm all over the both of us. She saw me begin to erupt and guided my dick so my long wet spasms would fly up in an arch over us and land on our naked bodies as her own steaming juices shot hard inside of me.

She didn't slide out of my butt for almost an hour. After we finished spilling our seed she fell down onto me and kissed me so deeply that I prayed it would never end. e made out together like that, her swollen flesh buried in it's new home as i worshipped her mouth and tongue with my lips. There was so much sticky spunk between us that it rolled out in bubbles and sputters from between our bodies as we loved one another. All around us other women were spent and purring from their own love making, and with the comet passed, Carlie and I stared into one another's eyes and made an unspoken pledge to never be apart.

I know that one day I will be ready to take Carlie's potent milk inside me and have her baby. Maybe she'll be the one to carry mine. Whoever that little girl is that we raise together will never want for anything and the very second she turns eighteen we're gonna fuck the living shit out of her.

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So fucking hot! 5⭐️

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