by Bullwip
Is Susan going to give him back to his black cock crazy wife? I hope not and that a Battle Royale ensues!
Just a suggestion but it might be more interesting if you’d written this chapter in the first person from Susan’s perspective. Still a great read.
~Anon
Telling Susan’s story in the first person is an excellent idea. I wish I’d thought of it. Something to consider going forward or on a rewrite.