All Comments on 'The Community Bull Pt. 02'

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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Is Susan going to give him back to his black cock crazy wife? I hope not and that a Battle Royale ensues!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

A kinder, gentler dominatrix. Interested in seeing where this goes.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Just a suggestion but it might be more interesting if you’d written this chapter in the first person from Susan’s perspective. Still a great read.

~Anon

BullwipBullwipalmost 2 years agoAuthor

Telling Susan’s story in the first person is an excellent idea. I wish I’d thought of it. Something to consider going forward or on a rewrite.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

Well written and very erotic. 5 stars

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