All Comments on 'The Confused Boyfriend Pt. 03'

I searched hard to mentally arrange these events and thinking processes. I didn't want to admit defeat. But the main people in this story are all confused. None of it really makes sense and let's hope none of them actually breeds. Society needs their DNA out of the gene pool asap. No integrity, no story, weak, spineless, pathetic males and lying, cheating slutty girls. Almost always drunk. Yes, a wonderful recipe.

It's a mistake to put yourself in the same category as Captain Ron. His stories are sprightly and teasing, with good pacing. Your stories are wordy and conversation-heavy, mostly to no real purpose. Reading your stories is like watching paint dry. I gave your first two stories in this series 2*s. This third installment gets 1*.