by JackCorwin
I've never wrote a comment and don't even have an account, but this is one of my favorite series ever on Literotica. The only others in the same league are huge hits. Don't feel discouraged, I think your prose is very strong and your plots are solid. The one thing I would change would to be to make the characters monogamous pairs. Please keep writing I really do love your work!- Lestibournes