All Comments on 'The Conquest of the Landers Twins Ch. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
No means no

Dont you know that no means no? It doesnt matter if she was so wet, she was dripping. Kidding! The me too crowd really pisses me off with that BS. There is a vast difference between an actual rape, and a girl saying no just for appearance's sake. It's called seduction. Men, and women, have done it for millennia. Great story! I guess the real question would be, you haven't continued this, why? Awesome story, begging for more. Here's hoping you give us chapter 2 soon. Two and a half men is a tv show. Two and a half years is torture.

Jedd

ArabsemenArabsemenover 4 years ago
Great Story

Just two things though:

To weigh anchor means the opposite of how you used it. It means to retrieve the anchor in preparation for getting underway,

And, damn it, it's a berth not a bed....lol

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Thanks for all the support of my followers. I have released The Conquest of the Landers Twins Ch 3 to initial good reviews, hope you enjoy the read.