All Comments on 'The Conversation Heart'

I thought your fruit fly analogy was pure dead brilliant, as my countrymen are fond of saying. Cheers. -- UK CYNIC

The characters in your story were quirky enough, and confessed to enough bad habits, that I was vaguely reminded of some the the 'Stephanie Plum' novels. For one thing, Stephanie is always obsessed with food, so your story hit THAT bell. But how could ANYONE describe the smell of flour, yeast, and all of those wonderful bakery ingredients in such negative terms! LOL!