All Comments on 'The Corruption Of Selena Ch. 01'

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don87654don87654over 18 years ago
Good, but could have been better

This story had the makings of a "100" but you did not go far enuf. You were seeking a full-time whore that you could fuck when you wanted to, and this gal was a young thing, ready to be bred. You could have bred her but you did not...for a reason(s) not quite clear.

tinman69stinman69sover 18 years ago
Damned great story!!!

Damn I want a broad that can cum a stream like that just once!! Especially a fiesty one like Selena. But she needed to be spanked right good too! I can't wait for the continuing saga of Selena and Madison!!!

joeys-gamejoeys-gamealmost 17 years ago
Heavy breathing

hand slowly running down...*shakes head,* "damn appleby thats hot!"

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Walking the earth, having adventures and shit. Not looking for any hook-ups, I just want to get me stories out there and have a chat on the forums.

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