All Comments on 'The Cottontail Restaurant'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago
Loving it so far

I'm loving this vibe, men being objectified and embarrassed and put in scenarios where they are humiliated. I hope to read more of this, maybe the waiters being exposed to relatives, ex's or former classmates they used to bully. Keep up the good work.

HWolf526HWolf526over 1 year ago

Needed to be longer, but if it is meant as the intro for a series it might be good, that is why I gave it three stars. A fun read, but too short.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

Well, a very good start but way too short. As a beginning it was fantastic but I do question the contract that the company could do anything to him within the bounds of the law. Seems like the "bounds" are very lax when they can get around tying up someone naked and then tickling him almost to death. Most people would probably pee on themselves if they were tickled too much or too long. Also the contract would not be enforceable but then this is a fantasy story and most limitations are not followed.

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