All Comments on 'The Cow of Jonas Pharmacy'

Good start but the end was a little abrupt. Is there a part two coming? Maybe we could learn Cindy is secretly in love with the nurse and the hucow lifestyle.

I checked the #2 star but that's misleading--I don't "dislike" this tale. It's a good strand of fantasy--a blend of BDSM and Fetish which has wide appeal, but the writing is minimally expressive and the plot is extremely simplistic. Essentially it accomplishes little but to say..."There was this woman who needed money and she was kidnapped and raped and milked forever and ever and ever and ever and called a whore by her sadistic handler...."

I hate to insult any writer who has created a story and expended the effort to get it published, but this barely meets the criteria for being a story. There are a huge number of "milking hucow" stories on this site which have a coherent storyline of sorts; if you have the initiative to keep writing, please examine them for style and substance and try again. I repeat...if you want to write, I encourage you to keep after it. Good writers are not born that way; they get there with hard work and persistence. Good luck and keep writing.

Five stars! Fantastic! I hope the author keeps writing!

This story had promise, but it was WAY too short. Also, does Cindy only have one breast or two BREASTS?

Great beginning. Apart two is needed.