by ZaneJaxon
Can't wait till you write about his treating his wife. This story was good, 5 stars.
Well, yes we need to read all about how he plots and exacts his revenge. Hope it is as good as this one or even better. Only three challenges though? Seems she could have done better.
Great premise.
But doesn't deliver.
The teasing needs details. What actually was done. To describe, for example, her kissing his earlobe in "a primal, sexy way" simpy isn't sexy.
Three stars.