All Comments on 'The Cruise Pt. 01'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Put her back in thd van, Neil

And sent it off without a wave.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Forget it!

"Set in a world of no Covid, S.T.D.'s or unwanted pregnancies"

I think you mist something: Set in the world with no Consciousness, Common Sense, Respect, or Love.

You presented alternative time line where many wouldn't want to be!?

-1 from me (between you and me, I wouldn't want to be there either)

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
?

Question marks do not go at the end of declarative sentences.

Huedogg2Huedogg2over 3 years ago
damn you make cuckolds

look like men. Your stories make terrible stories look like best sellers

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Set this down in any world you like

It's still a steaming pile of cow dung. Poorly thought out and badly written, please don't waste your time and continue this train wreck. It has nowhere to go.

1 star

26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

OOOOOHHHH you beast! Fun and love amongst the bottom feeders.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 3 years ago

You tag this Fetish, why not put it there?

"?" are for questions.

No Covid? Okay. No STDs? Pushing it, but doable. No unwanted pregnancies? So, in your world, women have control over their pregnancies? No way, unless you're talking Sci-Fi, because that's why we have birth control, because human women DON'T have control over their pregnancies.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago

Damm another English cuckold

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
Dont

Don't bother with any more.

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