All Comments on 'The Cruise Pt. 03'

by nigelver

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26thNC26thNCover 3 years ago

The Titanic hit an iceberg, but this garbage scow somehow keeps going.

katibkatibover 3 years ago
My fault

Yes, my fault. I suffer from a deficiency in imaginative powers: this story is boring.

AnonymousAnonymousover 3 years ago
There is always hope

They sunk the Bismark, finally.

sbrooks103xsbrooks103xover 3 years ago

Back story is rarely needed, but if it is, it should be at the beginning, not in the third chapter.

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