All Comments on 'The Crush Pt. 02'

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Anonymousover 2 years ago

Love this story, please continue. Looking foward to the next chapter. Thanks.

ScottishTexan over 2 years ago

Still not liking the dominance. It's too heavy, approaching abusiveness. This story would be a whole lot better if it was more focused on two childhood friends falling in love with each other. The title that you chose would support my opinion. 3/5 again.

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