by knowsbetterxx
The worst kind of conservative masturbatory nonsense. Should have known this was going to be hot garbage when I saw "swareys."
Pretty cool actually - different take on the ‘cuck’ thing. Enjoyed his efforts to take her down a road she hadn’t considered.
I liked it! Good fantasy well told and hot enough. I pulled one star because you didn't finish it. It was a 5 up to the last paragraph. The end would have been perfect for a cliffhanger for a continued story but I assume this is a one off. Keep writing. I like your stories and have added you to my follow list.
Cheers
SAGE
Pretty much stopped caring after the mild misogyny and wish fulfillment nonsense at at the start. No one at a dinner party oohs and aahs because someone lectures another adult about debate tactics.
the last wish was not fulfilled. she could have put one more condition for her hubby to watch as cuckold
Loved it, thanks even had me crack up laughing while they were in the sex shop.
Well written and very enjoyable to read. The ending was too rushed and I would have preferred her to have been a little less submissive, but still 5 *