by kamalw1
,,,and just because it cuckqueen instead of cuck doesn't make it any better,
At least the.men are out of their cages for awhile. Cucks can't even spell queen right.
After a nice feedback from the author I took a closer look at this, I admit to giving it short thrift based on the title.
I have to say that it didn't have the same feel as cuck stories, though that may be my male fantasy of two women coming out! It felt more like a polygamy story than a cuckqueen story, maybe that comes out in later chapters?
It DOES feel a little odd that London divorced her husband because he wanted a non-monogamous relationship, now here she is entering one! Maybe because it's not HER husband that's being shared?
this story confused me a lot, in first part of your story you write that he and tamara doesn't have sex much anymore but in both acts she seems to be all over him which confuses everything. And where is the cuckqueaning? you have one line where the sister tells tamara to go get a hot cloth? whatever that is.. beside that this is not much of cuckquening story at all. The story you do write is a great potential story, but finishes before you even get started. 3 for this story because, you definatly should keep writing but you need to be better at sticking to a red line during your story.
@Anonymous who is confused
He said they don't HAVE sex AS much anymore. Nothing in the story changes that. Licking up his cum after he jacks off isn't sex. If they have sex twice a week now, that is still less than if they were having it three times a week before. Don't be pedantic, that shouldn't confuse you at all.
Plus, seriously? "Where is the cuckqueaning [sic]?"
Here is the definition of cuckqueen: "A cuckquean is the wife of an adulterous husband"
He got sucked off by that friend and implicitly had sex with her. Then he was with London. Both of those instances were adulterous acts (knowledge of the spouse is irrelevant).
None of your complaints hold any merit at all.
Fun story. A few typos and other issues but not enough to be distracting. I’m not into feel but the foot job scene was hot.