All Comments on 'The Cupid Effect Ch. 04'

I can't see anything going well with those girls... They just can't help getting all these god-awful plans in their head.

Great story, I hope you can keep up your once-a-week rhythm!

...when well done, a good story is a great read.....filled with errors and misspelled words, it can be anything from less fun, to abject torture. This one was a little deeper into the annoyance end of the spectrum than I would normally tolerate.....but the story, the story...it just keeps surprising me.

And so, I'm perhaps more tolerant than justified, but there you go.

Looking forward to the next, hopefully more carefully prepared installment.

I will definitely be looking out for the next chapter. Continue on

Just sayin'

A bit mixed on this one since the control seems to be shifting to the "cheerleaders" Definitely can't wait for the next chapter but for me Dexter in control makes it a more fun read... simply my feelings on the matter (Reader's perspective)

It's a very interesting story. A very original one at that. Needs a little cleaning up, but not a big deal for me. I can't wait to read the next chapter.

I am kinda disappointed in the behavior of Dexter's friend Ana. he keeps telling her that something's happened since he got the chemical bath, and yet, she does nothing to test it herself to find out what's changing about dexter, which i think would really help lend to the development of the story, nor does she really try to get an answer out of him. I'm sure it's because she secretly loves him, but seriously, i'm finding her attitude to be a little short of my original expectations.

sorry, meant Agnes, not Ana

When might we get the next chapter. I know I'm not the only one wanting to know when :)

I'm currently writing chapter five. I'm hoping to be finished within 48 hours. My last chapter was rushed to meet reader's expectations. I don't want to make the same mistake twice.

Thanks for reading my work.

You're doing great... Thanks for producing great work.

Posted a new chapter this morning. Hopefully it will be available in a few days.

I hope you write enough of these that I have to google the Roman Numerals so I can properly title my posts.

That's what he has Control. So he needs to use it by Denying both Kelsey and Tiffany what they want most Him. Then go out with other girl's they would consider lesser then them . He still has to deal with The School Nurse Kim's Wife. who know's what the wife will be like Probably HOTT!!

the deep end

oh damn. great chapter

Those 2 cheerleader bitches are getting a bit out of control. Needs to get a handle on that. As for Agnes, who gives a shit? Why is there always a girl best friend in these things that the MC's obsessed with in some way but she's never been into him until later in the story when he's getting all the action? It's just so annoyingly cliché. Move on. If she wants him she'll come to him. Stop chasing the women and have some damn fun with your new powers!