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Get an editor

for those that read the original post forgive me, in m haste to post i upload a rough draft. I have since gone back and reuploaded the finalized version of the story and hope its a better read. I am working on finding a editor but so far i am alone in my writing and editing. I am contining to hone my craft as i am not a writer but trying my best