All Comments on 'The Cursed Tattoo Pt. 03'

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ServalisServalisover 2 years ago

Great Charter!

I am loving this Story. It has good Charakter development and its slow paced.

Keep going

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

Do you have any fucking idea how difficult it is to have sex for 5 hours a fucking day? I’m

I know, I know, it’s fantasy but let’s be serious for just a goddamn moment: he HAS to have sex. It doesn’t matter what he’s doing, what he wants to do or what is going on in his life, he has to fuck the 5 of them at least every 3 days.

He doesn’t know the first thing about then, what they like, how many siblings they have…not even their favourite colour but he’s just going to fuck them for hours each fucking day.

That’s not pleasure, that’s a job. No holidays. No time off, no retirement…nothing but fucking them every day and what groined when they want a husband? Children? Grand children? And with someone who loves them for who they are, not for how hot they are.

And what happens when they get fat? Or wrinkled? Or used up? Or he is hit by a vehicle and in a coma for a month? Or he catches COVID and dies….what happens to the girls then?

This is getting dumber by the chapter.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

It started ok but doesn't seem like a maledom story so far.

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago
To the criticizing anonymous below

To you I say the same as many other explanations of fantasy:

*jazz hands*

MAGIC!

Plus, Ellie is already working on a cure. If a cure is found, they'll be fine. If they get older, he can still cum in their mouths or on them. Likely the magic will do something anyway, we don't know enough about it yet. It's an interesting curse, honestly I'd be curious enough to contract it myself...

AnonymousAnonymousover 2 years ago

my favorite story this year. just fantastic. thanks!

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I mostly write male dominant mind control stuff. I have lots of stories in the works but I can't make any promises about any kind of a release schedule. I don't like reading unfinished stories, so I've decided not to release any of mine before they're ready. Of course, this ...

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