All Comments on 'The Curvy Sorceress and the Knight'

I really enjoyed this it's sad that the story ended so quickly

The only thing wrong with this is there isn't more of it!

Another chapter? Another story? More writing of some sort please!

A good start to your writing career. I hope you will continue this story.

lizbetcastle, I also am going to congratulate you on your initial effort. You paint a vivid picture of a charming night for two lonely people. Its pace is excellent, and the sensuality is lovely. Audette's internal dialogue is very well done, too. When I enjoy a story on Literotica I normally wish for further installments, but for Audette and Yasha, I don't feel that would be necessary. It's sweet and lovely just the way it is. Thank you.

Thank you for thinking of us big girls. It's nice to read descriptions that aren't the typical perfect Barbie Doll proportions. Full 5, you earned it.