by lizbetcastle
Thank you for thinking of us big girls. It's nice to read descriptions that aren't the typical perfect Barbie Doll proportions. Full 5, you earned it.
lizbetcastle, I also am going to congratulate you on your initial effort. You paint a vivid picture of a charming night for two lonely people. Its pace is excellent, and the sensuality is lovely. Audette's internal dialogue is very well done, too. When I enjoy a story on Literotica I normally wish for further installments, but for Audette and Yasha, I don't feel that would be necessary. It's sweet and lovely just the way it is. Thank you.
A good start to your writing career. I hope you will continue this story.
The only thing wrong with this is there isn't more of it!
Another chapter? Another story? More writing of some sort please!