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JohnsonLongwoodJohnsonLongwoodover 2 years ago

As a lifelong bicycle enthusiast I very much liked this story. I'll be thinking differently about those women reading in the park as I ride by now. Now you've got my wondering what could have happened all those time I was whistled at while I was riding. Overall a good story. The public sex is a nice touch. Evan seemed a bit repetitive in his dirty slut talk, sometimes seemingly just saying the same things with different filth words as if he were trying to work in everyone there is.

BTW, what park do you read in? lol

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Hi. I'm Toni Scales. I'm a 50 year-old mom. My passion is writing, especially erotica. I used to have a few stories and poems on Literotica many years ago. I also used to put videos on Pornhub and Xvideos and did a free daily nude Snapchat. I enjoyed it a lot. Now I'm older an...

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