by CandaulistScribe
While I love your story - the getting drunk and going home so quickly after her last show alone with her buddies was a bit of a reach. I would have liked it more if he said - he was getting sick because he had mixed feelings about this repeat. Do not take it further but - did she want to keep going and if so send him lots of pictures and fuck his brains out later. But its your story so keep it up )