All Comments on 'The Dare'

I enjoyed it a lot, but I had guessed the end long before it came.

Nice storyline that became obvious. However, what if... she decided to use a complete stranger for the "fantasy"? That means it would have backfired on her idiot husband tremendously! Cheers.

I,too, had it figured out. However, sometimes it's the journey, not the end that makes it good.

A nice story, reminds me a lot of Mr X which I assume is inspired by, but well written all the same!

Sometimes a story writes itself. I realized the ending was obvious, but couldn't think how else to end it. Any suggestions? I'm glad you enjoyed it. I enjoyed writing it. N.H.

a lovely and erotic story, thanks!!

She should have used that cute guy at the gym to fulfill her fantasy. LOL!!!! that would have backfired the husband's plan.

Actually, you're right. That would have been a neat twist. I could have done alternate endings -- the reader could choose. One, romance with her husband. Two, where she bonds with the cute guy and leaves Sebastian. I'll keep this in mind for the next story. Thanks.