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olsaltyolsaltyover 7 years ago
Suspending Belief

Nicely written intro, though she seems a bit TOO compliant for belief... That his very first command--to crawl to her bedroom, fully clothed was okay...but that she never thought to resist, or have second thoughts, hardly. Her only thoughts were to wiggle her ass, as if she crawled for men all the time. Otherwise, nice development and looking for the next installment!

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I’m learning as I go. And most of the time I’m a hot mess. My tongue is passionate and bold and I have a habit of letting my wild heart pull me along before I think it all through. But I’m trying. And, I think, I’d rather be a chaotic mess of burning passion than a perfectly p...

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