All Comments on 'The Darkness Above'

by Marc25

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ralphcralphcalmost 17 years ago
bs-bs-bs

you think she can't recognize her hubbies chest. he told her he would meet her at the room shortly and instead left a note there. my wife (and probably yours) would have stayed there(then she would have really had my balls).if i were the guy she took upstairs and stripped, she would have been fucked there. if i were her i would have fucked the nice guy.

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
I'm glad she found the right man!

You had me worried for a few that she fucked the wrong guy!

Glad it turned out well!

Thanks for writing!

Sexmate

fumunda cheezefumunda cheezeover 19 years ago
Very Good

A true whodunnit right to the very "my bite wound" at the end.

Great writibg and very erotic right to the end.

Nightowl22Nightowl22over 19 years ago
Great Story!

The story had me faked out until the very end. I was then glad to know that she was as good as Sherlock Holmes---she got her man. The game was afoot and she solved it.

Nice little twist!

AnonymousAnonymousover 19 years ago
fantastic

Just wonderful...!!!!

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