All Comments on 'The Daughter'

i like this story. It has more meaning if you have actually lived it, though. i'm looking forward to the next chapter.

Thanks - but I don't think about more chapters. I like the story with this open end, because I think, that it could inspire the imagination of the readers about future meeting between the daughter of his fiancé and him. In my opinion it's more effective than to tell the stories.

I really liked the story. Too bad you don't want to continue it, but it's your story, after all.

I do look forward for reading other stories from you!

this is a lovely story soo awesome ..now i hope that you write one in reverse role ..mother taking from daugther ....mature seduction ...as you might say :)

Thank you for posting this remarkable story! There are so few like this and they are by far my favorite. Sure there are cheating boyfriend stories but few where the boyfriend is forced into a bad position and secrets go on right beneath the girlfriend's nose. It is so hot when the guy is getting footed right in front of the girlfriend without her knowledge. I would love to see more of this story in the same direction and the daughter getting more daring all the time.

I know that it has been some time since you wrote this but I hope you will add a few chapters. You're writing skills are very good and you know how to express the eroticism of the moment.

Nicole is Awesome, what a dream of a step-daughter. Great story I really enjoyed it.

Some twisted family he's getting into there

I want a chick to take me to the edge

Absolutely amazing story. Would love a sequel!

Good concept, but you really need to work on your English language skills. For a start, print the story and read it out loud to yourself. You'll likely find several clear mistakes and many points when better choices might be made. If you *don't* find that to be true, then you've got a whole lot of learning ahead of you and your best recourse is either to read plenty of well written English language fiction or writing in your native tongue.