All Comments on 'The Day I Became a Monster Pt. 03'

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ZekeBEMEZekeBEMEalmost 9 years ago

Dis is fire keep up the good work.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Laughable

The story is absolutely repugnant. Not simply because the protagonist is a sociopath, but because the author is making all kinds of attempts to make him seem like "not such a bad guy", when he's a remorseless rapist and kidnapper. Even though I would dislike it just as much, it would at least be honest if the moral failings of the lead character weren't subject to being papered over by a writer incompetently trying to justify his heinous behavior.

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