All Comments on 'The Deal Pt. 03'

I am having trouble with the premise. It is a good story but there are so many ways that this idiot could stop it or turn the tables. All he needs to do is video her and either show her daughter or threaten to show everyone. Of course the other is simply move out of the city. The premise doesn't work. That being said though the sex is good.

The same story three times over.

Disappointingly ordinary.

he needs to take control, flip her over and ass fuck her into submission. then have her and the daughter at the same time

This one's going downhill. The premise is backwards. The fucking is okay but not good enough. And the writing still isn't up to par.