All Comments on 'The Deal With Lara'

Nicely done, plenty of room to move for another chapter.

Thanks!

excellent story, beautifully written and I would like to read more of Jake and Lara

Amazing. Great writing. Believable dialogue. Great sex scenes. Loved the little touches of actually knowing Philly geography. Can’t wait for another chapter.

Well crafted. You developed the chemistry between the two of them perfectly. As well, I hope you write a continuation between the two of them. Perhaps having them become more than friends. The line about his starting to have feelings for her was a great hook for another story about the two of them. K

I hope you continue with this story. Well written and plenty of back story that fits perfect

Please keep going! Every middle aged man reading this wishes he could be that guy. While I would love to see a serious relationship develop that's your choice. Either way we need more chapters!!!

Hot Story! Very interesting concept. Really well done. You really nailed the dialogue, every line was believable. Now I'm looking forward to reading more.

I really enjoyed that thank you

PLEASE make a sequel. That was a fantastic story and there's plenty of plot that can still be written. Love your work and thank you!

I will have to settle with only giving you 5 stars until the next installment comes out. Bravo!

FANTASTIC story! I have a friend who is an OnlyFans model and she describes her experiences exactly as Lara did in the story. It is an accurate description of what some sex workers have to put up with.

Thought is was believeable and well done. A solid 5. Agree with others that future installments would be good.

A star is born! Lol, can't wait to see where it goes ;->

Great work. You have a great imagination and a real talent for the scenes. Thanks for sharing. I look forward to hearing more from this couple.

Love Lara & Jake & how they 'met!'

Better then winning the lottery for a guy, especially one who's been divorced & hadn't been having sex except with his hand(s) ;)

They would make a great series & I'll watch for you to give birth to them! haha

You're one of my favorite authors, so creative. Thanks xox

Exceptional: erotic, believable, and beautifully written. I think a 2nd chapter is almost mandatory: there are so many avenues for development/resolution. Clearly, there's more happening here on both sides than just a business proposition.

Great story, every guys wet dream come to life. Keep writing, you’re very good.

Amazing story. Well conceived, well executed. As someone who is probably close to Jake's age, I found him very relatable. Lara is an interesting character, and their dynamic was tangible. Jake's issues with his erection during round 2 made it very realistic. 5 Stars all day long. Definitely a lot more meat on the bone if you decide to continue the tale.

Another great read, I said it before, you have a very good writing style, wish I could be as good as you.

Great descriptions all the way through, the characters are believable people, nothing over the top on either of them, great job.

Superb! Well written, well crafted and well paced.

One up for the older guys :) A little personal intrigue for me in this one, and besides, the story and characters are utterly believeable.